I find it sweet and sad at the same time! well done. Uhm it flowed well for me and to be honest :| I can't write tagalog poems lol. Good job! Very powerful! I enjoyed reading it.

Kung ang iyong minamahal
Ay hindi niya pinapansin
^ I don't get that two lines sorry.

Is it.
Kung ang iyong minamahal
Ay hindi (ka) pinapansin

Anyway Great poem! galing! apir haha XD 5/5!

Hahah, barok eh! heheh,:D lol!

This piece is certainly pleasurable to read. Methought that it's more like a song than a poem. Heh. It really did flow quite well. Nice work, kabs! :D