Comments : Fire.

  • 16 years ago

    by xxSnow Angelxx

    Wow!...great message....short but u've conveyed the message well n to the point..
    Great work...
    Kp writing!
    xxPoojaxx

  • 16 years ago

    by .K.i.T.t.Y.

    Short sweet and to the point. the whole time i was picturing this. it reminded me simply of arsonist(s/p?).

    good job.

  • 16 years ago

    by Ike Dizzle

    This is great. You use a lot of big words lol. Great though. 5/5
    -vino

  • 16 years ago

    by Fsams

    Wow Parker this is a superb write. Its very well penned and outstanding with a sheer powerful lexical quality. Your metaphors and imagery is so well put in this piece. Loved your descriptions. MAx 5/5 sure.

    TC with love
    Fsams

  • 16 years ago

    by NyellMoonlight

    "Pyrotic intentions, conceding, she's doomed.
    All that careful planning, one match and it's ruined."- great lines.
    Excellently written and unique poem.
    Well done. 5/5