Wow thats so deep and sad :( but none the less its very good. 4/5

Mkaay, the idea at the end of the "black body bag" is one I actually haven't seen before.
So that gave the poem some originality.

I'd work on structure in your poems so they're not just writing but have a flow and the appearance of the is more approachable.
Some people find it hard to enjoy un structured poems.

It was a good poem.
Not great I'd say 4/5 if I voted.

=]

Deep, sad and a little bit creepy...but it's a poem about death, so it's good that way...
the structure is pretty original, i must say and the idea of the black body bag just...i don't know...it made a really good ending...
5/5
keep going
*isabel*

Wow, this is intense, great job.
it flowed well, and the imagery was awesome!
5/5

It was a great poem. I like it but I think it could be much better if you did some rewording. But overall its really good. I enjoyed reading it well done!

Very good write
you just need a little bit of structure
and your all good

Most of don't have too many friends other then the ones we always see, that's not what makes life worth living though. Excellent poem on a good topic 5/5

The flow was a little off but I did like the poem. I gave it a 5/5.

Sad,deep ,
i think it's a great poem!

5/5

Likes it, being on the edge suks, but suicide is a permanant solution to a temperary problem.5/5