This was truly a gorgeous poem. the flow and rhyming made it smooth and peaceful. your wording gave it more style and originality. the depth was just fabulous.

5/5.

Yeh i loved you poem good work takecare

Good job!....truly beautiful....very good rhyme scheme too..n the flow was good..n te simple yet good choice of words added beauty to the poem
Great work on this one!
5/5
xxPoojaxx

Beautifully written piece, it is very true and ending is effective and very emotional. You used "word and words" too many times but rest of this poem is incredible. Imagery is also great and you created superb pictures with good wording. Flow is excellent in this one.
Well done this piece really deserves 5/5

Wow, amazing.
Lmfao.
I feel so horrible for these comments, I've been able to at leas ttell the others one thing wrong with each poem.

I know I hate comments that just say 'amazing job' because, i know there's more to be done. I don't know if your'e the same way, but eh.

If you ever need like any help or anything, let me know. I'd love to.
It'd make up for it.

Probably not though, it seems all your stuff is flawless.

Your a very passionate writier. And I love the rhyming and words of this poem its amazing. Nice work.