Wow. beautiful poem
it was really touching
the methaphor was really nice
loved it!
5/5

I've said it before. and i'll say it again. Your poems are a true delight to read and this is no exception. it flows well and has an underlying rythm to it that is not forced.
i especialy loved the last stanza where she is giving heaven but it is worthless without him.
love is the law
love under will
Rocky