I liked this a lot. Especially how the first and last sections were the same. People can't always pull it off with it being that great. Good job :)

I loved the way you repeated the starting stanza at the end too...it had a great effect on the essence of te poem...it added intensity to the work.....the fear n sadness n so many unexplaiend emotions can be felt clearly...
the word choice was brilliant...all over...good wrk!
xxPoojaxx

Interesting poem. I liked it. Another 5/5

'Frigid fingers griping her helpless heart.
She can't defeat the devil's vicious game.'
^ i loved how you described that.
this is one of your best because your description words are over the top; amazing; wonderful.
wow.
you did a wonderful job.
keep it up hun.

The repeation at the first and the last of the poem really made it exceptional, the flow was good, only off in one or two places, and the wording was marverlous, simple brillant, the emtion was strong and clear, You did an excellent job on this. Keep up the good work 5/5

There was no one but herself to blame.

your this lineshows the pain and darkness of the story. it was sad thugh but nice work and good choose of words. take care 5/5

It was a great poem! I like the way you rhymed some lines! good job. And the way you repeated the 1st stanza making it the ending is really good! excellent work! keep it up.