Comments : Do You Look At Me??

  • 16 years ago

    by xPerfect Chaosx

    Omg Khrsytyne... I am like sitting here crying right now. That is so sad, yet so absoutley beautiful. It just goes to show that you should always look deeper than the surface. It was wonderful. 5/5

    Much Love,
    Cakehead #1

  • 16 years ago

    by Lonely Little Dreamer

    Sadness..good moral to the story though..friends are forever..you shouldnt lose touch with them no matter if you have a significant other...anyways..feel free to read, comment and rate my material..i have several poems..enjoy!

  • 16 years ago

    by firexdancer

    Wow. this is beautiful, im not kidding, it almost made me cry it's so sweet.. the flow isn't perfect, but this poem doesn't need to have perfect flow or punctuation to be amazing, cause it already is. 5/5 i would give you a better vote but i can't so i'm adding this to my favorites.
    gabriella

  • 16 years ago

    by Ducky Ramone

    Omg this poem is amazing. i almost cried. i got so into it that my friends phone started ringing and scared the crap out of me. thats the kind of poems i like to read. thanks for writing it. :)

  • 16 years ago

    by Beautiful and Crazy

    Wow. that is deep girl. i love it tho. 5*

    ~stacy~