That was cool, a sweet poem really. the flow was a tad bit off, but the emtion was clear, and the words were simple yet effective. I hope you don't take this comment to be something other than honest, but I don't know what else to say. Great job 5/5

I like this poem for many reasons. And alot of people can relate. Especially me. Very nicely written and put together.

I liked the message a lot...easy to relate to. However, some of the wording could have been done so as to keep it flowing better. Nice job, all in all.

It indeed has an unnatural flow. Tightening up the lines and adding more coherent details in regards to the substance itself is rendered necessary, in any case. Otherwise, it would be considered tedious to read by the readers. Other than that, when you stated the line, "Because there's a special world, And a special purpose just for you and me.", it made me smile not because I feel that I can connect to it, but because I interpreted it in a rather different [unromantic] way. It is, in my perspective, quite philosophical. ^___^ Overall, it's a nice work which looks promising to be enhanced, nonetheless. Regards xx

The flow seemed a little off to me, i belive if you added more detail to each line then they would grow stronger. Try adding more discriptive words throughout it. Other then that i found this to be quite a special and sweet poem. I'm sure dedicated to someone you must care about a fair amount. Well done with this poem the emotions were portrayed quite nicely~mel

Very sweet poem...yeah though the flow was a tad off..u've conveyed the message properly....emotion was clear..but it could hv been done in a btter mannner..but anyways...it has it's own charm...which is good..
i give u 5/5 for the message conveyed n the sweetness in this work!
Kp it up!
xxPoojaxx

It doesnt matter about the flow, as long as u got the emotion and ur feelings through, then its still a good poem. i liked it, it flowed in it own little way, but still i dont think that matters. it was short, sweet and got ur point across. 5/5 always
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Kate~

This is a really good poem Nathan, dang i just wish i was that good lol.!! ttyl peace

Well w/e i liked it, i thought it was a great poem. the flow doesnt really seem that off to me, but i know nothing... well 5/5 always
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Kate~

At one point it was a little forced on the rhyming the flow was nice and this poem you used stronger words!

I really enjoyed reading this poem it was fantastic
Great job

Cheers
Kris