A good poem here.... especially the last stanze I liked that one alot

Good job =)

Hey,
A nice poem, I love the first two stanza's, good work 5/5
kisses stephanie

Good pem i liked this one

A great poem. flow was okay for me. just a suggestion to use more powerful words. I know you can do it because you're a good poet! keep up the good work :)

Apparently, this isn't one of your best works, considering its unnatural flow and forced lines. However, if I may suggest, perhaps applying a consistent metre or a certain syllable count (say 8, 10, or 12+ syllables) in every line will--in my humblest opinion--augment this poem to a higher degree for the most part.

Other than that, I can personally correlate with this piece. The "What-If's" and "If Only's" statements certainly tugged a chord with me. If only one could turn back time and change things for the betterment of everyone, but will it ever be better though if we were given the power to change the past? This, I wonder...
Nicely penned, nonetheless. xD

-Debbie Cakes

Fantastic poem you did a great job and thanks for the comment

keenan