Really passionate poem
you could feel the emotion
5/5
loved it

You really have a lot of talent and if you keep up the writing you'll go really far =D I understand hatred and wishing a person would get a dose of the pain they give out but don't let it consume you completely or it'll end up eating you alive from the inside out =P I'll also take you down roads that are really hard to find your way off =(
I hope things get better for you ^_^ and hang in there =)
Best wishes, Rhea

God poems, good relations, good expressions.... 5/5

Nazeer