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Melissa and Andrea this was a beauty. I like the style and flow. The imagery and metaphors were outstanding!

This poem was very lovely indeed. A pleasurable read. Well done, both of you! (^^,)

Lovely lovely poetry
keep it going ;)
5/5

Wow...excellent write...i adore your choice of words, it has this nice touch of sarcasm to it that proves most effective...great work guys

A well written Collaboration)

You kinda lost me the first stanza, so i was not drawn in. But since ur poem is number one, i thought i should go on. and i'm glad i did because i thought the metaphors to this old women (if i'm correct) is so perfectly personified. loved it. keep it up
PS: now i kno why its number one
-Writer