WOW!!....
perfect...filled with love...beautiful...every line held deep passion n loyalty..
Great job!

5/5=)
xxPoojaxx

Thats very nice!!

God bless u

Thanks for you comment. =) I like this poem! It's so sweet. ^^

xxx

Hmm.applause guys!!! its perfectly done! it was really amazing,, u really made a great style! its kinda unique and no one can compare... great job 5/5

This was rather delightful to read. I love the seeming fact that it -did- flow fluidly and that its lines were unforced. The beginning line(s) gave me an impression of a lascivious, romantic imagery in my mind's eye... Nice shot for an Etheree.

Debbie

Wow
your amazing
this poem was utterly incredible
nice work
your so very talented

Wow, what a wonderful write, the passion could be felt in this read. Thank you for sharing. May your heart continue to be filled with peace and joy everyday.

sadaddy

This poems amazing - its so natural and so real! rlly unique too! 5/5, definitely!

Fsams
Great job :) This piece is beautiful. I love this form of poetry.

~Bravo~
Take care Cindy

Obviously you have been in love. Thats written so well! I love it! Good JOB! A+ % points all the way!

Wow so beautiful n a new form for me. I love the piece

You write such cute poems!^^ They're so adorable hihi!

Very nice etheree....very beautiful and romantic! Take care, Debbie

Another really good poem of yours.
<3

Sweet poem with simple words.
Really liked it.

I was very surprised at this piece loved the emotions in this and liked the form as well. The flow was great and the heart felt emotions seemd to justify not only the title but the emence heart felt emotions that drove this piece well done congrads!!! Plot121

This is a short poem but very meaningful and sweet great job
laura

Such simple words which created amazing beauty. I loved this piece. Prob my favorite I read of your 7 today. Well done touching and sweet. 5/5
~mel

I love it its good. i can relate

Very good write indeed!
It had strong emotion and sometimes it's hard with these types of poems but you did great! 5/5
love
kaila