Sitting on the beach

by bacha   May 30, 2007


Sitting on the beach
Red Flowers surround me from all the side
Coldness of the waves touch me
Drop of the damp fall on my face
Suddenly a feeling taken over my mind
Slowly I saw the moon light
& the mountain standing high
And you came in my mind

Pay attention... my darling
Am not afraid of losing you
Because I know that you will always be right by my side
Surly...
I will hold you like a rock
I will hold you like a glass that I afraid of it crush
And I will not let you go tenderly as the clouds
And harsh as the sting

Cause...
I have desire I can't reach
With you every thing impossible become simple
And when you shake I shake back
And when you smile I smile back

So Please...
Don't thought that you choose the wrong person
Maybe you don't know that I hang my friends tight
And I will hang you tight
Is true that we don't know each other from so long
But you know that we share the entire happy things in mind, secrets, and silly tips you know what I mean

And now
Now in these times, days I feel like we know each other from so long
So don't forget about us.

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  • 16 years ago

    by Makayla

    I absolutely love this poem, you hate a talent, keep it up dear!

  • 16 years ago

    by sabrina

    Wow i really like it!
    you're a talented writer!
    thanks for commenting on my poem

    xoxo sabrina

  • 16 years ago

    by Elizabetta

    I like this poem a lot, especially this line:

    Sitting on the beach
    Red Flowers surround me from all the side
    Coldness of the waves touch me
    Drop of the damp fall on my face
    Suddenly a feeling taken over my mind
    Slowly I saw the moon light
    & the mountain standing high
    And you came in my mind

    Awsome job! 5/5

    ~Lizzie~