Comments : Then One Day

  • 16 years ago

    by tiffani

    THAT WAS VERY G00D! KEEP UP THE GREAT W0RK! L0VE TiFFANi

  • 16 years ago

    by SADADDY

    This is a beautifully written poem with great expression of your emotions. May your heart continue to be filled with peace and joy each and everyday.

    sadaddy

  • 16 years ago

    by dawn green

    Very nice write! i really enjoyed it! keep up the good work!
    god bless
    5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Debbie

    #2: This was quite a delightful read, sweet. One of the things which makes me feel glad in regards to Love is how a person dramatically changes (in a good way) through the aid of his/her better half. Nicely penned, nonetheless. I gave it a 5/5!

    Debbie

  • 16 years ago

    by Melpomene

    I found this poem to be a sweet and interesting read. The emotions were powerful and I liked how this poem changed. It kept me interested from start to end. Well done on a nicely written love poem~mel

  • 16 years ago

    by Boy

    Aaah that was very nicely done.. nicely panned. i loved yuour writing style. take care 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Bryan

    Tis a good poem amber, love the flow and word choice, i give it a perfect 5/5!!! keep them coming!!!

  • 16 years ago

    by HaileyHelen

    All the pain she had felt
    slowly faded by
    she knew the lost girl,in the mirror
    was really just a lie

    that was my favorite stanza really great poem!i loved it!