Comments : Rain On A Sunny Day

  • 16 years ago

    by claire

    This is a good poem - a tiny bit confusing but v well written! def 5/5 - very original and poetic (my criteria for poetry)
    ~claire

  • 15 years ago

    by Sora

    This was a ggreat write. it was heartfelt and i absoultely loved the title, it fit well..

    I know that I'm too blind to see
    this little black cloud that rains on me.

    i enjoyed those two lines the most. a great opening for a poem such as this. job well done. 5/5.

    -Ashlei.