"nothing matters but you and me"

gosh don't we all wish to find someone like that.. so touching and well written all the best my dear if this is whats really going on in your life. Awesome write i enjoyed it alot. Keep it up 5/5

Hey hun...
coolie poem sweety..
what about what about what the comment above said for a title " NOTHING MATTERS BUT YOU AND ME" or maybe something like "The world is out of view its just me and you.."

coolie love take care... xhx

The love is present in this poem. you need to speak up, let your hearts words be known to your secret lover.

5/5 David

This poem has a lot of love in it .... i think that its really good keep up the good work....
a big 5/5 for you keep writing those poems coz your really good at it ..

love ya long time
-Amelia

Heyyy,
This is a cute poem, maybe you could make it longer? Maybe add more descriptions or something? Just a suggestion!
Good poem tho,
Take care,
Geo
if u have time please comment on my newest?

Im sorry i can't think of a name but its realy good any way keep it up5/5

Hey,
aww so sweet and touching poem, I think we all wish to have that someone special, I already have mine =D, the flow is nice and I enjoyed reading it, maybe you could make it a bit longer? just a suggestion, and about a title how about 'only you' or 'my world' Im not very good with titles, sorry,
5.5 from me,
kisses stephanie

'unspoken' or 'nothing but you'

it was a good poem, not really above average but good nonetheless, the flow was good, it was so sweet and you managed to write your feelings. but as Goergi said up there, i would consider lengthning it and/or trying to put more details into the poem.
but overall, 5/5

gabriella

This is beautiful.
Short and sweet.

"Every night
As I lie awake
Staring at the roof
I think of you"

I'm not sure why, but I loved the part. I guess maybe it's because I can see it in my mind.

5/5.

Well wriiten, love is definalty strong in this poem, the flow is good, the word choice is excellent, and the message is clear. Maybe it could be a little longer it seems like something is missing. As for a title maybe nothing maters but me and you, or only you. 5/5

Aww i loved this poem, im sure like me alot of others can realate to it .. your beginning stanza really spoke to me;
I walk past you
Every day
But not one word
Escapes my mouth
It's such a typical event that we all at one point feel, and looking back at it you wonder to yourself..why? why did i not just even say hello..
Even though your poem was short and simple it was very deep, and you portrayed something that is important to alot of us ; true love!
insiaring!
xXx

I've never read a short poem thats deep like this one. good poem 5/5

Im sure everyone cal relate to this poem cuz everyone has felt this at somepoint in time. its amazing.

Short, sweet, and simple. the triple S: beautiful