Some good passages. sometimes u did rimes sometimes u did not... so that fact i didn't like but apart from that the story is good. i liked:
"no one really knows each day
that i am fighting back tears
and i am living this lie"
so sorry but gonna have to be harsh with this one and give u a 3/5 but i'd really like to give u a 3.5 instead.

I like this poem, but you need more deep words to make sense. really, it is still good but ah never mind. it is hard to explain. well...good job. 5/5

This is awesome. i agree with the first cmt made about the dreaming stanza. that was awesome. i could really relate to this poem. good work! :]

Alright this is good. i dont quite understand the 3\5 the person up there gave you im giving you a 4\5. as much as i would love to give you a 5\5 im just not sure. evrything went together well and it is very deep and ur a wonderful writer but im just not sure about a 5\5. idlove to give u a 4.5 but yeah. great job!!

Wow, ur such a good writter. i like ur work so much im makin u as a favorite!!

I love this poem it reminds me of me and my ex boyfriend. keep on writing poems. ur an excellent writer!