Comments : Done With You

  • 13 years ago

    by Kristi lee

    Wow that's good.
    did that really happend?
    and i know how that's feel

  • 13 years ago

    by NyellMoonlight

    This poem is filled with emotions, with really good flow.
    I know that feeling...
    5/5

  • 13 years ago

    by Tricky Daze

    I felt anger and hate in this poem..You reflected emotions and feelings so well..The wording was suitable and I didn't see any mistake of flow
    Good job,
    Laura

  • 13 years ago

    by David

    I feel that you need to add a few more words to each line, it would help the flow and effect the reader experiences.

    5/5 tho, well done. David

  • 13 years ago

    by nikki

    Wow, so emotional and deep. i loved it, did it really happen? the poem was great but it still didn't really sound complete to me. just not enough detail in the words, sort of thing. but over all. it was great that was just my view. but 5/5

  • 13 years ago

    by Melpomene

    Harsh and raw wmotions portrayed with anger I loved it and thing you made this poem really deep. Im sure so many ppl can relate to this. the flow was spot on you really get the flow in your poetry flowing smooth without any bumps in the way. Well done on writing a poem like this enjoyable. ~mel

  • 13 years ago

    by Corruption

    Great poem
    you wrote this amazingly
    this is my fav one so far
    great job
    really enjoyed it
    if it is true
    hope things worked out for you

    Keenan