Hey, man, this is a really good poem.......yet i've not broken a heart yet...... :P....yes i read those magazines and stuff, but i dont pay attention, i go with what my heart says, and stay with it. and....well.....that just gets ME into the broken heart situation......o.O lol

but it was an awesome poem.....i can see where your coming from...:)...girls can be mean.....>.<

Another great poem! I don' t know why some girls are like this, I guess those ones should have been born men just kidding! (Some men) and its those ones that mess it up for the rest of us. There's always someone better, I have yet to find out but I'm sure along the road I will. Again a very great write, I always enjoy reading your new poems. 5/5

BTW thank you for your comment on my Beautiful poem! Oh and on the comment above I meant to say you will not I will sorry! But yeah you will!!!

So heart felt this is :)
broken hearts are hard to fix, but not all girls listen to the stupid magazines and books.
Im sure u'll find a lovely girl soon :)
i get where this is coming from and i loved reading it :)
as always a great poem ^_^
~*~Jen~*~

Ah u said u lost ur inspiration but this one denies that statement. 4/5
best of it 4 me was:
"Why cant you just be honest?
Why cant you just be true?
Why cant you just be faithful?
Is that too much for you?"

"You read those stupid mags,
Those crazy novels too
Yet when a real heart is calling,
You rip it right in two!"

Wow, this is really good.
i like this line a lot man

"You read those stupid mags,
Those crazy novels too
Yet when a real heart is calling,
You rip it right in two!"

5/5 good job