Breathe unto me.

by Isabelle   Jun 1, 2007


You are every color I see,
You are the air I breathe.

In order to make it real,
breath unto me,
tell me its true.

I tell you that I love you,
but I haven't heard you say it back.

You are the sun that lights my every day,
You are the earth that rumbles in my wake.

Every day without you,
is like a sin against the world.

Breathe unto me,
and tell me this is true.

We'll always be together,
because our love is forever.

Breathe unto me,
my love,
let's make this last,
for eternities...

I want to be able to breathe,
breathe with you,
be with you forever.

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  • 16 years ago

    by Simple Sensation

    Your writing this love poem, when it began it seemed like it was a proper love letter to your partner, nothing bad in it. Yet then you suprised me by this stanza;

    "I tell you that I love you,
    but I haven't heard you say it back."

    I found this part suprising as it was unexpected. Then you go on, back to this love poem idea. Apart from the suprise i thought the poem was a little cliche. It seems everyone writes about this kindof love. The flow was ok. Try using varied punctuation including enjambment. It may help it. Other then that a good read. Keep writing! xx

  • 16 years ago

    by Kristi lee

    Wow that was good if u want you can look at my poems

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