I thought it was good. There wasn't a lot of flow but there doesnt necessarily need to be any. Interesting way of showing things, I don't agree really but I liked you showing your opinion and not being ashamed. Good job
Interesting. I don't know what else to say besides that. Your point of view sounded very.. 'Numb'. Almost clinical. It just felt like you'd been through a lot, without any positive outcome. Instead of this write being something productive, it sounded forced and founded purely on the apathy of things, rather than acceptance. Purely my own interpretation though. I hope i'm wrong.
I loved this poem. i mean hello its true. i mean soldiers r proud of there scars they got in battle because it shows how strong they are and they fight they went thru. its a whole lot different from war, but it has the same scence, u were in a war against urself and the scars show how strong U are and your own fight and that u made it thru.
oh and before i forget, i think its supposed to be SCRAPE not SCRAP lol anywas 5/5
wow, amazing, you have a nice way in describing something with a view words like: Red pictures on her skin. the flow good and I enjoyed reading it, when I read your poem I got the feeling that you have been through a lot. I hope I am mistaking.. well take care and 5/5 from me.