Comments : Scars

  • 13 years ago

    by Brittany C

    Well that is an interesting poin of view. I did like this poem. Though the flow was a little off. The word choice was great. I gave it a 5/5.

  • 13 years ago

    by DavidBrendan

    I thought it was good. There wasn't a lot of flow but there doesnt necessarily need to be any. Interesting way of showing things, I don't agree really but I liked you showing your opinion and not being ashamed. Good job

  • 13 years ago

    by BehindThisSmilex

    I love this one. my favorite part is the beginning. nice job.
    5/5

  • 13 years ago

    by Vanessa

    Definalty a diffrent way to write about such a cliche subject, the word choice was great, the imagery was vivid, and the message was clearly dripping with deep emtion. Well done 5/5

  • 13 years ago

    by Miu

    The message is very nice. It's true that people should be proud of their fight against what cruel world put us true and show others that their not alone. I find it an amazing poem:)
    5/5

  • 13 years ago

    by Ironic Allure

    Interesting. I don't know what else to say besides that. Your point of view sounded very.. 'Numb'. Almost clinical. It just felt like you'd been through a lot, without any positive outcome. Instead of this write being something productive, it sounded forced and founded purely on the apathy of things, rather than acceptance. Purely my own interpretation though. I hope i'm wrong.

    L.x

  • 13 years ago

    by xxSnow Angelxx

    Hey...Excellent write!
    the imagery was vivid and the choice of words was superb....a beautiful poem....very well written from a different yet interesting point of view...Good job!
    5/5
    xxPoojaxx

  • 13 years ago

    by Tiffani

    I loved this poem. i mean hello its true. i mean soldiers r proud of there scars they got in battle because it shows how strong they are and they fight they went thru. its a whole lot different from war, but it has the same scence, u were in a war against urself and the scars show how strong U are and your own fight and that u made it thru.

    oh and before i forget, i think its supposed to be SCRAPE not SCRAP lol anywas 5/5

    lots of love
    Tiffani
    <3

  • 13 years ago

    by BeautifulxMess

    Very good poem. I wasn't crazy about
    this poem. I'm not a fan or slitting and
    "scar" poems. But I can't judge by what
    I like but the poem was good. God Bless
    5/5
    <3Tay

  • 13 years ago

    by Lozbi

    Wow.. thatz vry good.. i never thought about self harm that way b4.. u hav shown me a diff side 2 it.. keep writing.. i love the flow of ur poem 2

    take care
    .x

  • 12 years ago

    by Anonymous Angel

    Hey,
    wow, amazing, you have a nice way in describing something with a view words like: Red pictures on her skin. the flow good and I enjoyed reading it, when I read your poem I got the feeling that you have been through a lot. I hope I am mistaking.. well take care and 5/5 from me.
    kisses stephanie

  • 11 years ago

    by claire

    Begining is my favorite!!! but it was an awesome poem!!!!!!!

  • 10 years ago

    by DreamingOutLoud

    I love it!!!!!!!
    The ending intimidating as it challenges others to open up and tell their story - awesome!!!

  • 10 years ago

    by Grunge Angel

    Good points,... all valid. Nice job

  • 9 years ago

    by redxiii

    I have too many scars to remember the story but I do remember a few a select few scars and brands stand out I've went down that path many times and sadly I believe I'll go down it many more