Well that is an interesting poin of view. I did like this poem. Though the flow was a little off. The word choice was great. I gave it a 5/5.

I thought it was good. There wasn't a lot of flow but there doesnt necessarily need to be any. Interesting way of showing things, I don't agree really but I liked you showing your opinion and not being ashamed. Good job

I love this one. my favorite part is the beginning. nice job.
5/5

Definalty a diffrent way to write about such a cliche subject, the word choice was great, the imagery was vivid, and the message was clearly dripping with deep emtion. Well done 5/5

The message is very nice. It's true that people should be proud of their fight against what cruel world put us true and show others that their not alone. I find it an amazing poem:)
5/5

Interesting. I don't know what else to say besides that. Your point of view sounded very.. 'Numb'. Almost clinical. It just felt like you'd been through a lot, without any positive outcome. Instead of this write being something productive, it sounded forced and founded purely on the apathy of things, rather than acceptance. Purely my own interpretation though. I hope i'm wrong.

L.x

Hey...Excellent write!
the imagery was vivid and the choice of words was superb....a beautiful poem....very well written from a different yet interesting point of view...Good job!
5/5
xxPoojaxx

I loved this poem. i mean hello its true. i mean soldiers r proud of there scars they got in battle because it shows how strong they are and they fight they went thru. its a whole lot different from war, but it has the same scence, u were in a war against urself and the scars show how strong U are and your own fight and that u made it thru.

oh and before i forget, i think its supposed to be SCRAPE not SCRAP lol anywas 5/5

lots of love
Tiffani
<3

Very good poem. I wasn't crazy about
this poem. I'm not a fan or slitting and
"scar" poems. But I can't judge by what
I like but the poem was good. God Bless
5/5
<3Tay

Wow.. thatz vry good.. i never thought about self harm that way b4.. u hav shown me a diff side 2 it.. keep writing.. i love the flow of ur poem 2

take care
.x

Hey,
wow, amazing, you have a nice way in describing something with a view words like: Red pictures on her skin. the flow good and I enjoyed reading it, when I read your poem I got the feeling that you have been through a lot. I hope I am mistaking.. well take care and 5/5 from me.
kisses stephanie

Begining is my favorite!!! but it was an awesome poem!!!!!!!

I love it!!!!!!!
The ending intimidating as it challenges others to open up and tell their story - awesome!!!

Good points,... all valid. Nice job

I have too many scars to remember the story but I do remember a few a select few scars and brands stand out I've went down that path many times and sadly I believe I'll go down it many more