Wow.
Well done for a first one!
This was great.
I loved the simplicity of it yet it was powerful still.

Great work =]

Good=)..does'nt seem like it's your first acrostic...well penned..short yet powerful!
5/5
Good job!
xxPoojaxx

It is beautiful.. well worded so short but explains it all... good work 5/5

Very deep.
I like your point of veiw, its very interesting.

Short yet so beautiful.
The emotion's run deep.
I really enjoyed this poem.
Well done,
Elaine.