Enjoyed ur poem a lot. especially liked the fact that this girl has totally breached u as u said and the feelings that come from that you barely are able to control.... haha that was cool when u said:
"I maintain my composure
While inside I can't control"

and also:
"You define perfection
In every thing you do
When I look into those eyes
It's your flaws that I see through".

seeing through flaws! they aren't even there anymore when ur in love! those two ideas i really liked very good job overall. 5/5!!

I, too, enjoyed reading your poem with its vivid descriptions and splendid imagery. I always admire love poems which depict of a subject talking about a goddess-like maiden in such a fine overstatement. And this piece is no exception to the rule.

"You define perfection
In every thing you do..."

Ah! I adore those lines. Having seen the perfect embodiment of absolute perfection is what I have yet to encounter! You are fortunate.

"God must have known that you were special
When he laid his hand on you"

That portion reminds me of the song "God Must Have Spent A Little More Time On You" by N'sync. You'll know by now why, just take note of its title. =) (It's quite similar in thought with your line.)

To reiterate, I really, really enjoyed this poem of yours. It was a pleasure and my own delight to read as well. =] Thank you for sharing!

-Marian

I love this one. it shows the respect you have for women and it is really well written and quite sweet.

This poem I truely enjoyed reading, the imagery was quite vivid. The description was portrayed quite beautifully. Definitly a facinating read.

"You define perfection
In every thing you do..."

Those lines were beautiful. Truely sweet and adoring. I found them to hold such strong emotions which you placed carefully with alot of thought into this piece.

Well overall this peice was capturing truely caught my eye. Well done ~mel

This one is really beautiful..The choice of words was excellently

"I maintain my composure
While inside I can't control"
^^Cool...well expressed lines

"You define perfection
In every thing you do..."
^^And this one is so true and beautifully penned..

Faboulous read!this peice was filled with passion and emotions..Very sweet work!

Great job!

5/5
xxPoojaxx