This poem is very very good.
It's not like the other love poems, where people just talk about who they love,but yours was way deeper than that..great job.

This is a beautifu freestyle love poen on a heavenly scale

This was a lovely freestyle poem
I think it should have a tad bit more structure though
this piece was beautiful
I loved it
you did an amazing job
5/5 love always kaila

Exvellent freeverse...beautiful write...i think a proper structure was lacking though but give you an easy 5/5 for the depth and power portrayed in this write!

Great job!
=)

xxPoojaxx