Very good, i can relate.

Wow very deep nice transitions and words 5/5 maybe u can read one of mine.

This poem was so sad yet deep.
love the way you have written it.

I'm only a girl
I'm alone in this world
I'm lost for words
I'm holding on strong
I'm going away
Somewhere i can stay
Somewhere to roam

great stanza.
filled with emotions.
5/5

best wishes

Very exclusive, and i love that we were invited...sounds poetic yet thought of the soul, very good!

Very exclusive, and i love that we were invited...sounds poetic yet thought of the soul, very good!

How nice it would be to just start over with a clean slate.

Thanxx for the comment . i told you i would repy the favor .
very good job i really liked it .