Bright desire (my first poem ever)

by Leonardo Sayadi   Jun 3, 2007


Angellike straws produce thousand suns flashing into my eyes,

but instead of peering,

my mind takes me on a cotton-filled ride through golden clouds.

Rainbows stop singing when shimmering tenderness disappears,

leaving desperate courage into unsettled arms.

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  • 15 years ago

    by Biya

    Its so well written
    5/5
    cheers
    Biya

  • 16 years ago

    by Debbie

    This was a rather brilliant piece. I enjoyed the fine imagery you promptly depicted in it--simply enchanting.

    I myself was enchanted. =] Beautiful piece, nonetheless. I hope you all the best and take care! ~Debbie

  • 16 years ago

    by Cyma Khan

    Short n sweet n having so much meanings in these lines...
    keep up the good work!!!

    God bless u

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