This was a really good poem! I could really feel the pain and confusion taking place in this poem. Wonderful metaphor, as well. 5/5

I love the second to last verse, and i agree with emma - great metaphor. definitely a 5/5!

I love this poem its very very good

I love this poem its very very good

I could feel it all happening, I could feel the pain.

You give me your hand
Help me to the top
Then push me back over
This really needs to stop

This was my fav bit coz i know exactly how this feels. great work

Love the first two stanzas...great write 5/5