The Mirror

by pandora   Jun 3, 2007


A veil of brightness fallen over the smooth darkness

glowing lion's eyes

a glance

white ribbon around a chocolate bar

breathless beauty

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  • 16 years ago

    by NyellMoonlight

    This is a breath- taking piece. Its uniqueness and beauty is priceless. Wonderful imagery and wording.

  • 16 years ago

    by pandora

    Thanks. i just started writing....

  • 16 years ago

    by Hatori

    A very good use of words in this one! The line:
    breathless beauty

    Formed an image in my mind. I don't quite understand the topic of this poem, but other than that, great job. Keep it up, and I look forward to reading other poems that you have written :D

    With all due respect,
    Hatori
    The Illusionist

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