An interesting poem. The last day of school is always sad. This poem is sweet about your friend, and had a good ending. Some parts did sound a bit forced, with the rhyming etc. But other than that, it was good. =]

Tammie

Goodbyes are never forever unless you want them to be =) Well I remember my last day in school.. Its really sad :( anyway to improve this you should use more powerful words :) flow was okay for me. thanks for sharing :) tc

I know exactly how you feel about wanting the last day of school to last.. Pretty good poem dear : ) In some parts, it sounds like the rhyme might've been forced, but still -- nice poem.

Great poem.. good emotion and nice flow.. keep it up :D

Great poem.. good emotion and nice flow.. keep it up :D

This was a great poem really.
i thought this part sounded cool,
"My great friend, Amanda
My "peek-a-boo panda"
lol, ive never heard that term.
anyway 5/5 love.