Okay! This poem exactly describes my friend. Makes me think of her and curious of how she's always like that. Hmm. 5/5

Well done,
a very good poem, it was sad, short but meaningful.
emotion portrayed well.
Love Tara-Kay
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I didn't like the last three lines, how it was all one sentence and you didn't seem to break it up too well. I felt that some of the word choice was not exactly great, but overall, I felt you chose a good title and scene.

Similar to my favorite style in poetry to read. I liked the title of this it was capturing. Thats what got me interested from the start. A short piece which held sad emotions.

well done. Loved it alot.

5/5
~mel

This is like Etheree form and I know it takes a lot of effort and lot of dedication to write these rule-governed poems. I liked your work coz its just one of my fav types plus you have added so much meaning with those very precise wordings. 5/5 all the way

With love
Fsams