I really loved this poem. The flow and use of words is awesome. great job! =]]

I love this poem. It's true and I think a lot more people need to seriously read it and understand it. Excellent write. 5/5

` Liz

This poem was really inspiring!!!

Wow, This is one amazing poem...I'm actually glad you commented on one of my poems or I would not have found this poem. The line that really stands out the most to be would have to be :

'And suicide attempts, does anyone even value life?'

It added such emotion and really made me get in with the feel and flow of the poem, Its also powerful reflecting on the poem itself ^^ xx :D

WOW! great write! it makes me wanna read all ur work! ur words are beautiful! great job!!! :D

adding u to my favs :)

Your poems conain two catergories at the same time, 1st i think its talk about society then after its inspiring which i think thats is nice, its up to each and every1 of us to make the world better if we see thats it is in a mess as you specify to your last two lines 'if you want change, lets it start with you, be great leader we look for'' yes thats is true. Do say something is wrong if you wont say what is right. Very nice poem

IT TOUCHED ME L0LZ. NAHH 4 REALL IT DID

Great poem really inspirational good job

It only takes one person to make a difference! Great Poem! 5/5

This poem is spectacular! I love the message! It is so true! So full of thought! AMAZING! Everyone should read this and take it in! GREAT JOB!
~Kayla