Friendship

by Tasha   Jun 5, 2007


I miss the way are friendship use 2 be. The way we laughtedand did stuid things. Ever fight just brought more light And ever day just went away. You'll always be my best friend till the end. No matter what you say.

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  • 16 years ago

    by Somber Esprit

    Hi tasha

    Really liked your poem!! it had great flow! there are a few gramatical errors and stuff you might like to fix though.
    1st line, 'our' instead of 'are',
    2nd line, separate 'laughed-and', also 'stupid' is missing the 'p',
    and i think the 3rd line, you mean 'every' instead of 'ever'
    these changes will make a great poem FANTASTIC! i hope you don't mind.
    keep up the good work. you have a talent for rhythm!

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