This.
is.
so.good.
wow. keep it up youre really talented
<3jess

Its my pleasure to rrc this poem coz it is very related to me and I really like this kind of pieces. keep it up

How can I stop this unbearable agony?
How do i cease this horrible pain?
It's as if it's eating me whole and the
hurt inside me a can no longer sustain...

These lines really made me to ponder and cudel my brain for a while. The rhetorical questions are great plus the flow and the content of this piece. Tc 5/5 dear

With love
Fsams

So for now I'll just pretend I'm happy
and be filled with glee,
but this burden of pain I have will
soon have all of me,

those lines are amazing, i loved every single word of it. great work, you have such a talent, keep it up. 5/5

This poem is really good...but i think the ending wasnt the best it could be..but still this is a good poem.

~Michelle~

I just wanted to stop by and say i loud and clear YOUR POETRY IS AMAZINGLY GOOD!! Keep up the great work, it will pay off soon! Take care and hope to read more soon!
Always, Sami

Wow

marvellous poem

so sad and gloomy

captivating

A beautiful poem. very beautiful.
very truthful and honest.
you expressed yerself well.
keep up the nice work!