Comments : A cage to far from home

  • 16 years ago

    by PoeticJustice

    Wow, thats deep.
    i liked this verse:

    what does my pops think, and how about my mom
    what should my excuse be for the reason Ive been gone
    and what about the kids, what lie should i give
    knowing that there dad never had a reason to live

    its very....raw and truthful. great write.

  • 16 years ago

    by PoeticJustice

    Wow, thats deep.
    i liked this verse:

    what does my pops think, and how about my mom
    what should my excuse be for the reason Ive been gone
    and what about the kids, what lie should i give
    knowing that there dad never had a reason to live

    its very....raw and truthful. great write.

  • 16 years ago

    by HaileyHelen

    Another great 1!