Excellent poem , great wording and the flow was good, I love you idea of helping the world one person at a time ,and we all do need to straighten up and learn to get along with each other, great write, your friend Tracy dean 5/5

Beautiful poem ... keep up the great work! 5/5

Great job, i like this poem a lot. The meaning was strong and the imagry was good. keep it up

Sad But True

Loved it! it is a message that more people need to get! keep up the good work! also thanks for the comment!
god bless

I love this poem. It makes me think a lot

it points out what someone could do to make the world a better place instead of making enemy's

This is definitely from the heart of a caring soul. This is very powerful and carries an important message and meaning, one we should all listen to and take heed.

Peace, Poetry & Power,

Gary Jurechka

Yes, very true nice work. The world WOULD be a better place...it is not racism, it is the mere idea of race that seperates people. So as long as there is race, there will be rasicm. :(
Stay real, chin up,
Eleni