Wow. it was beautifully written, it was sad in a way, but it was so sweet to write this. so many people go through this everyday and your just helping people realize that it does happen alot. great work,
She is making it through
Every step bit by bit
Of recovering from this illness
I know she'll get through it
my fave lines^^

I can relate to your words, this piece it sad and very beautiful at the same time.
Fourth stanza is my favorite, it's greatly written.
5/5

These poem is so so. Some parts are good but others not. I don't like the flow. First stanza is good. Second is just great, that is my favorite. Third is poor and fourth is worse then first two. The last stanza is nicely written and i liked it. These poem is 3/5

Your poems are truly amazing. The last stanza was my fave this time. Especially these 2 lines "Fight for your life
And all of your hopes and dreams".. Another wonderful poem
5/5
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"Find something that makes you happy
It helps no matter how miserable you may seem"

this stanza could be taken
as a way to live life

like people arent as miserable as
they seem, just talk to them
and you will see

idk, i just think weird

but i thought it was a great poem
and i loved it

5/5

This poem had a nice concept behind it, I found it to be kind of sweet in it's own little way. The flow was off in some places though. I belive some parts to be etremely great while others lacked. A good effort though. ~mel

Extremely great*

Excuse my spelling error.