I loved the poem, really a good write.

I likedd this one. it was great and meaningful.
Love is a cruel game
In which we all are pawns
my fave lines^^
it is so true though, some of us are lucky with love and other people have to keep trying, 5/5

"Love is a cruel game
In which we all are pawns
We'd laugh and joke all the time
Until new eyes I looked upon"- amazing lines, very deep.
Beautiful piece, I really enjoyed in it.
You write great friendship poetry. 5/5

Love is a cruel game
In which we all are pawns
We'd laugh and joke all the time
Until new eyes I looked upon-these are the best lines. I liked this one more then the rest of your poems. But I don't like first two stanzas. The rest of poem is good it deserves 4/5

"love is a cruel game
in which we are all pawns"

thats my favorite part ^^

i thought it was a very good poem

i like the rhyming and it never seemed forced
and it had a great flow

5/5

"love is a cruel game
in which we are all pawns"

These two lines your strongest part of the poem. I found them to be powerful and also honest. The flow was good. You definitly pulled this one off in my opinion. Well done.~mel

Excellent write, I liked it a lot, keep up the great work.

Peace, Joe