Excellent acrostic...Powerful choice of words..yeah i was'nt sure of what you were trying to get across..but i loved the vocab and the way it flowed..it created a perfect picture ..
Great job!
5/5

xxPoojaxx

I think I understand this one. It is saying that a little girl who is verbally abused and physically don't just have scars on the outside but also on the inside. That are there forever. I liked this poem it had a nice flow and word choice. I gave it a 5/5.

From the first stanza, I got the impression that the guy had released something that he was keeping a secret, and once it was finally revealed, it hurt the girl a great deal. And then I thought that the last line was kind of reflecting on the damage that had been done to both of them, from what was just revealed?

I don't know but that was my take on it. This, as usual, was flawless work. It flowed perfectly, and I just loved it. Excellent.

Wow. This poem was very well done with lots of emotion in it. The vocabulary fit perfectly in with the subject of virginity loss, and your last line, as well as the lines before it, were hard hitting. The last line of your first stanza was kind of sketchy, but it has been forgiven by the whole last stanza. I like this poem... it shall be placed on my favorite's.

Well done m'dear,
5/5
~Stephen White

Oh, I forgot to mention... how on earth does the poem tie in with the acrosticized phrase?

Excellent. Few lines with great meanings. Well adhered to the acrostic rules. 5/5 I rated it for it is really worth it.

Wow.
I don't usually like acrostics.
But this poem....
It's flawless, dear.
I wish I could criticize yours
Like I've done to the others.
But I can't.
I'm sorry I can't make yours better.
But...
It's already the best in my eyes.

5.5, dear :]

Wow u r really i loved acrostic thingy u did it very well kepp up the work! 5/5 always
Kate~

Hey! hmm well i dont like acrostics, they are usually really forced and childish, but yours in INDEED an exception! i thought it was....chilling. dark and complicated and i thought maybe it was about verbal and physical abuse??? but i cant be sure. But dont be put off by people not understanding, i love it when people dont understand my poetry. besides, not all poetry is made to be understood, only appreciated. =]
I like this poem and im going to read some more of yours, id appreciate it u commented my latest?
Geo
xoxoxox

I love acrostic poems, and this was a very well written one.
It flowed well, the imagery and wording was awesome. There is so much talent within your words.
Well done
Much love, Tara-Kay
x

Hey,
I'm not a big fan of acrostic poems, the words are most of the times forced, and I myself can't write them,, well you surely can, I like the words you used and It didn't sound forced at all, so you definitely deserve a 5/5 from me!
kisses stephanie

Powerful, really powerful, I loved this, I won't pretend to know what you are trying to get across, but the flow was great, the imagery was vivid and clear, the vocab was exceelrnt, and the emtion was powerful. Well done 5/5

Wow...That was deep...Very good too...5/5...Keep it up...

Lol that was cool, I love poems like this. haha 5/5

-Liz-
ty for your comments hun

AMAZING

Wow... hun.. this was so sad... yet so well written!!

Your poetry has sure grown since I've read some. Wow.. Tehe!

Very nicely done!! :D

This one is simply amazing :) It has a good flow, excellent choice of words. 5/5 all the way!

I have to say i really enjoyed this poem. The flow worked really well. The vocabulary was understandable but not really simple. The entire poem had a good flow. I like this ntire idea you have going on through this peaice. The imagery of the peice was really clear. It was quite an emotional and very sad read. The flow of the poem was good and it really made me think - i love peoms which do that. Keep writing! xx

Wow. this is an amazing poem. i really enjoyed reading it. great job. 5/5
`-jackie.

Eternally reminded that she'll never be whole.

simply AMAZING..
a damn good write..

~Wake~