You write very beautifully.

I am humbled by this masterpeice, yet touched by its content

Once again, you're very blessed with a beautiful talent! ^_^ 5/5

This was really beautiful. Keep up the good work.

He wanted my essence,
He desired to steal my pride,
My principles,
My goals and everything I stood for,
He wanted to destroy me.

Truely worth of 1000 comments. I loved your wordings and the great flow. Keep it up