Chelsey,

"If you feel the carpet slips from your feet
When you think not one person even cares
Walk a few streets down to mine
You'll see me with open arms standing there"

Loved these lines. A truly uplifting piece.

Always,
Jeannie

Awww great job!!

What a great job Chelsea! I love this poem! You always provide a great write. 5/5

Chelsey
Your love is shining :) Great poem.
Take Care Cindy

Awwww my little girl is growing up so fast .... this poem just melts my heart.

I don't want my eyes on no one else but you
I only want to hold your soft warm hand
I hope my feelings can make you feel special
I would never want to be with another man
^^^
What a beautiful ending stanza!

Your wonderful heart shines in this piece sweet pea....

Love Momma

Well written expression of what love is and can be...i love the metaphorical use of "ace in my deck of cards"...it was brilliant, great work