Comments : Spirits

  • 16 years ago

    by Michael D Nalley

    Very unique formatting connecting each line in continues imagery

  • 16 years ago

    by Karl Wild GG23

    I wish we could say the world could change from wrong to right, but in reality it never will. Once again excellent flow and word choice and the imagery in this poem was fantastic, I could picture everything in my head as I read along. Great work 5/5