Our Time

by RetroRavey   Jun 7, 2007


Where has the time gone?

With you there is no such thing.
No earthly boundaries hold us.
An hour with you
Feels like only a moment.
We have all the time,
There's no rush.

Have I told you
That I love you?
Did I say it enough?
Did I say it too much?
We have all the time,
There's no rush...

One kiss.
One hour...
Can you spare the time?
I want to spend it all with you.
We have all the time,
There's no rush...

Where has the time gone?

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  • 16 years ago

    by Debbie

    "No earthly boundaries hold us."

    I adore that line. It is indeed something which I've anticipated for quite a long time now...

    As for the poem, I find it rather pleasurable to read. Bittersweet to say the least, I dare say :). It was well-presented on the whole; so nice work on this hun. --Marian

  • 16 years ago

    by Brittany C

    I know how that feels. Great poem. I really liked it. It had a nice flow and great word choice. I gave it a 5/5.