Aww i love this poem. 5/5

Great job.I think it sounds alright.You got talent.

Wow, that is totally true, u are really good

Great way to express it all, seems so...real.
But in the end it all makes us better

I hope that you never look to comfort and advice from a bottle of gin. alcohol never solves anything.

poems amazing...just like it's author

-Tar-[[Baby]]

Aww cute poem
keep it up!
-Lisa

THIS IS A NICE PEOM FOR WIRTING IT SO EARLY IN THE MORNING!!

Awwww, u kno wat can u feel abt love and understand the pain and happiness is just happen to feel wat we didn't expected or not. I really like yo style. U got talent!!!! Great poem!

Really well writen for 1 am in the morning good job....some time you may think you love someone but you really don't...lust and it sucks....good job 5/5

Awwwww..... datz da most sweetest poem i've read soooo far! 5/5!

Lol, I think it sounds good! I can totally relate to this poem and I think everyone can. About having your heart ripped over and over again and going back for more and trying to find an escape. I like this poem a lot. ^_^ And thanks for the comments on my poems!! It means a lot! :D

Much Love,
.:Danielle:.

This is a good poem,,
especially when you wrote it at 1 in the morning.
Think my head would be too tired for that ^^
Anyway, enjoyed reading it.
Take care

Thanks for your comments!,, really appreciate it.

Aww i like it
5/5