Aw so sad for both you and this girl who cant see what a great guy you are.

"I may not ever see you again,
But i loved you from the start."

That is the perfect ending to this poem. It is the line that will stay with me. So much truth and misery. One day you will find a girl that will cherish the fact that you will always be there for her and in return she will be there for you. An amazing poem (5/5) no less than what it deserves no less - i would give it more if i could. Take care.

Kelly
xx

Aww very sad, I'm so sorry you feel this way, it breaks my heart cause you seem like such a great guy, and this girl is crazy if she can't see that. You deserve much better, you deserve to be loved and not decieved, and I know how hard it is to find a perfect somebody especially when your heart belongs to another. 5/5

Cute, romatic and sweet. i lov it:)

"He used you like a rubber,
To satisfy his needs,
He didn't want a future,
Nor you as his to be."<---- i like this a lot

i totally dig your writting style bro, its really really good.