The whole poem is very interesting.
awesome.
i like how you put thins in parentheses and i think it gives it an extra "effect"
5/5

I've felt that before. A lovely poem, and I really enjoyed reading it. 5/5

RavEy!

This poem is so true people always fear going over and having a conversation with a stranger, whether they're shy or don't know what to say. Excellent poem with great imagery and flow, great job 5/5

I'm sorry.
I know I was supposed to do
4.3 or lower but it's just that...
I like reading the best or I get bored with poetry.

So I'll start on reading this :]

It feels like you cheated on your format.

Make the people understand what you're saying
Without what's inside your parenthasis.

A poem is better off without quotations.

All in all.
It was alright.
It wasn't the best I've read from you.
The structure was fine but it felt as though you cheated.

4/5?

Nicely done. I am quite fond of writing and reading Acrostics as well. As a comment for this piece, I think that it needs tightening-up with the lines in order to enchance its flow. There were a few grammatical errors (i.e. in the third stanza), and the parentheses broke the words intended to be read in an across manner. On the other hand, however, I find it quite an interesting read. Attraction at first glance and timidity are factors which affect my social relationship to the opposite sex sometime...coughs... A fine work, nonetheless. 5/5 ~ Marian

Wow this is really good. i really like how you wrote lines for each word, most people only put one word for each letter. but u did a wonderful job on this. and it flowed nicely too. 5/5 keep on writing

~Kristina

I really liked this poem. It was words real good. It flowed really nice and i enjoyed reading it well done hun.

xxx alex xxx

The flow wasnt too great i think its because of the way the lines were broken up.. but i understand it sbecause of the structure.. the poem was very sweet and simple and still an enjoyable read.. id say its a 4/5 but i will vote 5 anyways :D

This isnt your best poem, but i do like it. it grasps first love PERFECTLY with the looks and the feelings, and the nerves.
Geo

I really thought this was good, acrostics are so hard to write, but you did this one well, it didnt flow brilliantly but your words and emotions made up for that.
5/5
Well done
xxx

Sweet, and wonderfully refreshing. do you believe in love at first sight? I do, that was how I found my husband lol. Anyways I love this the flow was great, the word choice was excellent, and the emtion was touching, as ususal you have done an excellent job. 5/5

Ii really liked ur poem nd how u made dat sentence an acrostic poem nd put all ur thoughtsz nd ideasz together i think it could of been a little bit better but i still really liked it 5/5 =] GREAT JOB

Very good i could feel the poem .

I love it and the acrotic type poems r my fav

:) This is a good acrostic! Something that doesn't happen very often, so be proud of yourself. 5/5