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by lost   Jun 8, 2007


Dark
Empty
Lost
Can't

Dark room
Empty thoughts
Lost control
Can't feel

Dark room of pain
Empty thoughts of past
Lost control of everything
Can't feel anything

I
You
I
You

I loved
You hated
I gave
You took

I loved you
You hated me
I gave everything
You took it all

Razor
Blood
Scream
Death

Self-explanatory....

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  • 16 years ago

    by Good Enough

    Wow. good poem. it really explians alot.

  • 16 years ago

    by reborn

    Read the 1st stanza n was like wtf?! he has got to be kidding, but read on and started to see how ur poem was meant to be. original write i gotta say. 4/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Getting Out of the Sea

    Ouch, but sometimes, you gotta let him go b/c if he/she doesnt love you back, then just let him go but i understand it is pretty difficult to let him b/c you loved him/her. B/c ive been tthrough the dark days. he didnt love me back but i did, and now i did let him but it was hard. yeah...but this is great poem! 5/5
    -k

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