Heart of quick sand

by pandora   Jun 8, 2007


You stood on my heart. .
sinking a little deeper with each beat
welcoming the quick sand like a dare devil
you sank
. . knees, thighs, hips. .

. there is no more chance for rescue. . . . .

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  • 16 years ago

    by Debbie

    Another splendidly written, allegorical poem. Well done!

  • 16 years ago

    by NyellMoonlight

    I love it, it's beautifully written with a lot of emotions.
    Great job!
    5/5

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