I really like the form and structure of this.
the short sharp lines are powerfull, and a few words manage to encase a larger meaning and emotion. really enjoyed reading this

Its beautifull :) i gave it 5/5 even tho its short it has a lot of emotion in it. i really enjoyed reading this poem :)

Whaa it's small
but it says enough
it describes everything you're feeling and i really really love it. Also love the ending, it's very outspoken and clear.
Really L O V E it !!:)
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