Really liked this poem.
Great job.

This poem was enchanting. i liked the beauty of it all and the sweet love that is shown. bravo on your talent and keep it up =) never let your talent escape u for it is a great one

5/5

xoxo,
tess

It made me feel like i was there

It made me feel like i was there

It made me feel like i was there

Thats i realyy sweet and lovely poem

A really good poem again...your a great writer keep writing:)

Wow.....beautiful......wow it was beautiful i loved it

Great poem!
it had a good vocab without being overpowering, the flow was wonderful... and i just really liked it...
great job! 5/5

Wow...Ok that one just stole my breath =) I could actually clearly see the picture that you described in this poem so well that I felt the sunshine on my skin and heard the birds singing ^_^ I haven't read many that did that to me =) I give it a perfect 5 =)
Rhea

Hey, i loved it, my friend. you are really good at this arent you.
i've missed u.
love Tara-Kay
x

Whoah! How cool is that!? Nice one "handsome" *Laughs*....
Keep up the good work...!

R.I.P
+rOcKiNg dEnIsE+

That was the sweetest poem I have read in a very long time. I loved it