So BroKen

by iloveyouandrew   Jun 8, 2007


Please just understand
i can't be without him
i wanna feel his kiss
your touch
and be in your arms for the rest of my life

i know you feel for me
but just as a friend
and it kills me to hear you say
"i love you" to the girl he is in love with

i know i'll never have a chance
and my friends say "get over him"
over and over i'vr tried to get over him
but it just dosn't work

so i hope he is happy
that's all i want for him
but ill lay here
dead inside
while he lays next to her
in her bed....

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  • 16 years ago

    by XxxBeenThereRockedThatxxX

    Very cute...but in the first stanza you should change the you and your to him and his.....because it doesnt match the other pronouns in the rest of the poem...hope it helps!

  • 16 years ago

    by Lady Nik

    I can really relate to this. I loved it. Keep up the great work Shanik